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Relinquish the Chains by ~Arcanoi:iconArcanoi:



Relinquish the Chains
by Derek

Whisperers of the eternal curses,
Blasphemers of the haunting face,
Angels of this Nightmare's lust . . .
come away with me from this place.

Our hearts will quicken unto the Fall;
Our bodies thrash past joy and pain.
This knowledge of self, and ourselves,
oh, my disciples, how can we abstain?

The walls are crumbling around us,
The ceilings, cracked and shattered,
The world is torn, its life lay bleeding--
as though such a concern ever mattered.

We will herald the beginning and the end;
Our hands, our lips, our souls as one.
The laughter and the smile . . . the beauty.
The beauty of what we have undone . . .
©2007-2009 ~Arcanoi
:iconarcanoi:

Author's Comments

Yes . . . well. As I wrote this I was drawing on the turbulent wants, needs and desires that plague me in an unpredictable cycle. One moment I feel the glacial hollowness that requires nothing at all, and the next, the inferno that burns for companionship. I suppose this is an example of the latter. In any case, this is a showcase of the internal struggle with which--I assume--many can identify.

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:iconponddreamer:
I've been reading thru your work. I must say I am impressed. You have a good command of words and choose them well. I am going to enjoy reading the rest of your work. :rose:

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Shamelessly proud mother of =Mr-Ie

"There are two tragedies in life.
One is not to get your hearts desire.
The other is to get it."

George Bernard Shaw
:iconarcanoi:
Thank you. I'm glad that you are enjoying the works I have up so far. I'll try to keep it going. :)

I hope you will do the same.

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If the world does not, or will not, accept you . . . then, accept the world for what it is.
:iconspangle1:
your a very talented writer and your words give vivid images in the readers mind well done my friend xx

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:iconarcanoi:
Thank you, again. I'm glad you're enjoying these pieces; and, please, keep your works coming. I especially enjoyed your recent piece: "little one."
:)

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If the world does not, or will not, accept you . . . then, accept the world for what it is.
:icon2022:
amazing, wonderful poem i love the way you describe your emotions

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:iconarcanoi:
Again, thank you. This of poem--and any of my "darker" works--is more in keeping with my core style. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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If the world does not, or will not, accept you . . . then, accept the world for what it is.
:icon2022:
welcome

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FREERICE.COM For each word you get right, they donate 20 grains of rice through the United Nations to help end world hunger.
:iconsygmazx7:
nice poetry man. I like the 'Dark' style of your poetry
:iconarcanoi:
Thank you. I'm pleased that you're finding these works intriguing.

--
If the world does not, or will not, accept you . . . then, accept the world for what it is.

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